高中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫作中的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤分析

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英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)者在學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中都難免出現(xiàn)這樣或那樣的錯(cuò)誤,這在英語(yǔ)初學(xué)者的寫作中也不例外。如果教師能正視學(xué)生寫作中的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,并對(duì)這些錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行認(rèn)真分析和研究就可以找出學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)以及運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言時(shí)產(chǎn)生問(wèn)題的癥結(jié),并對(duì)癥下?,有的放矢,從而促進(jìn)高中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)水平的提升。為此,本文對(duì)高中生英語(yǔ)寫作中語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行了分析研究。

語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤具體分類如下:

1. 主謂關(guān)系中人稱和數(shù)量不一致性(person/number agreement)錯(cuò)誤

由于漢語(yǔ)的動(dòng)詞不受主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)的影響,英語(yǔ)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要和主語(yǔ)保持一致,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要隨著主語(yǔ)而變化。而學(xué)生主要用漢語(yǔ)思維,因此他們往往沒(méi)有習(xí)慣去考慮主語(yǔ)是第幾人稱,是單數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù)。例如:

a. A number of students is going to learn a foreign language.

b. He go to school by bike every day.

分析:

a句中a number of +復(fù)數(shù)名詞做主語(yǔ)時(shí),其謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式。b中 He是第三人稱單數(shù),在一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞go應(yīng)該加es。

2.時(shí)態(tài)(Tense)

高中生在寫作中經(jīng)常在時(shí)態(tài)方面犯錯(cuò)誤。英語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)種類繁多,動(dòng)詞的構(gòu)成形式隨著時(shí)態(tài)的變化而變化。中文里沒(méi)有時(shí)態(tài)區(qū)分。動(dòng)作或動(dòng)詞的時(shí)間由跟在動(dòng)詞后的諸如“著”、“了”、“過(guò)”等副詞小詞來(lái)表示,對(duì)高中生來(lái)說(shuō),掌握英語(yǔ)的時(shí)態(tài)不是很容易。實(shí)際上,學(xué)習(xí)者在頭腦里很清楚語(yǔ)法規(guī)則,但經(jīng)常混淆或忘記改變動(dòng)詞的詞形。例如:

a. A baby can cry as soon as it was born.

b. I spend 50 yuan buying the clothes.

c. I will not come here if it will rain tomorrow.

正確的句子:

a. A baby can cry as soon as it is born.

b. I spent 50 yuan buying the clothes.

c. I will not come here if it rains tomorrow.

分析:第一句是一個(gè)常識(shí)問(wèn)題,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。第二句“我買這件衣服花了50元”應(yīng)該是過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。第三句主句是一般將來(lái)時(shí),從句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

3.語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)式在英語(yǔ)中比比皆是,學(xué)生由于漢語(yǔ)思維的影響,很少考慮到用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)(Passive Voice)。雖然中文里也有被動(dòng)式的含義,但與英語(yǔ)里被動(dòng)式表達(dá)方式完全不同。英語(yǔ)里的被動(dòng)式要求有助動(dòng)詞be和一個(gè)變異的過(guò)去分詞形式,其中這個(gè)助動(dòng)詞帶有時(shí)態(tài)和人稱數(shù)量信息,中文里需要使用諸如“被”、“使”、“讓”等詞語(yǔ),不需要有不規(guī)則的動(dòng)詞形式。這對(duì)中國(guó)的學(xué)習(xí)者來(lái)說(shuō)就有潛在的困難。例如:

a. New bicycles must keep inside.

b. The book has to return at the end of the week.

c. The food has cooked.

d. Knife should take away from babies.

正確的句子:

a. New bicycles must be kept inside.

b. The book has to be returned at the end of the week.

c. The food has been cooked.

d. Knives should be taken away from babies.

很明顯,這些句法結(jié)構(gòu)己經(jīng)被確認(rèn)為未能正確使用英語(yǔ)中的被動(dòng)式。學(xué)生還會(huì)犯一些其它方面的錯(cuò)誤,其中之一是,常常把英語(yǔ)里沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的詞(組),如take place, occur, happen, belong to,appear, break out, rise, die等用作被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。 

4.固定搭配錯(cuò)誤   

有介詞短語(yǔ)的搭配,固定詞組的搭配,更多的是特殊動(dòng)詞的搭配和用法出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤最多。很多學(xué)習(xí)者在記單詞的時(shí)候,不記搭配和真正用法,錯(cuò)誤如下:

a. He suggested to go there on his bike.

b. My teacher explained me the text very carefully.

c. My mother made me to choose the one I liked best.

正確的句子:

a. He suggested going there on his bike.

b. My teacher explained to me the text very carefully.

c. My mother made me choose the one I liked best.

據(jù)以上的分析,中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)者的英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用很大程度上受到其母語(yǔ)的影響,直接翻譯,沒(méi)有記住這些動(dòng)詞的特殊用法。

5.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤

由于學(xué)生對(duì)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的概念不清楚,對(duì)不定式、分詞、動(dòng)名詞的用法不明白,對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)分析不正確,常把非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用作謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。學(xué)生不知道在英語(yǔ)句子中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞只能有一個(gè),如果有另外一個(gè)動(dòng)詞出現(xiàn),這個(gè)動(dòng)詞有三種情況:一是并列謂語(yǔ),但是這時(shí)候必須有連詞,如and, but等;二是出現(xiàn)在從句里面;三就是以分詞形式出現(xiàn),現(xiàn)在分詞和過(guò)去分詞,還有不定式,F(xiàn)在分詞有主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和進(jìn)行時(shí)的含義,而過(guò)去區(qū)分詞有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和完成時(shí)的含義,不定式有將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)的意義。例如:

a. In the museum there are a lot of interesting things look at.

b. I am looking forward to see you.

正確的句子:

a. In the museum there are a lot of interesting things to look at.

b. I am looking forward to seeing you.  

分析:a句中己有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞there are,用來(lái)修飾things,此句缺的是后置定語(yǔ)。b句look forward to是一個(gè)固定短語(yǔ),后面要接動(dòng)名詞。c句要用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ),跟所修飾的名詞之間是主謂關(guān)系,表示動(dòng)作正在進(jìn)行,因此用“sleeping”,相當(dāng)于“the child who is sleeping"。

6.冠詞錯(cuò)誤

學(xué)生在翻譯時(shí)常會(huì)忘了考慮冠詞,或者說(shuō)不重視冠詞這個(gè)問(wèn)題,常有多用或少用或錯(cuò)用的弊病。冠詞考查分兩個(gè)方面,一是冠詞的殘缺或多余,考生要注意關(guān)于含有冠詞(不含冠詞)的用法以及加冠詞與不加冠詞的區(qū)別,如:in charge of與in the charge of, out of question與out of the question的區(qū)別。二是冠詞the, a, an(不定冠詞和定冠詞)之間的相互誤用。

英漢名詞確有許多共同點(diǎn),但是也有不少不同點(diǎn)。英語(yǔ)名詞有可數(shù)與不可數(shù)之分,漢語(yǔ)里沒(méi)有,且一般情況下,名詞都可受到數(shù)量詞的限制。因此,英語(yǔ)寫作中,一旦涉及到advice, news, progress, weather, information等少數(shù)常用不可數(shù)名詞時(shí),學(xué)生往往會(huì)犯錯(cuò)誤。不過(guò),在使用英語(yǔ)不可數(shù)名詞時(shí),又會(huì)出現(xiàn)兩種情況,一種是絕不可以用a/an或數(shù)詞來(lái)直接修飾,如上述提及的幾個(gè)名詞:另一種情況是,少數(shù)不可數(shù)名詞在被形容詞等修飾后,可用a/an等來(lái)修飾。如time(時(shí)間),rain(雨)。所以我們可以說(shuō):We had a wonderful time yesterday. 例如:

a. The air is the most important thing for our existence.

b. The driver brought the car to stop. In this way, he avoided an accident.

c. When sun was setting, he still did not catch any fish.

正確的句子:

a. Air is the most important thing for our existence.

b. The driver brought the car to a stop. In this way, he avoided an accident.

c. When the sun was setting, he still did not catch any fish.

7.代詞的錯(cuò)誤

代詞主要有人稱代詞、物主代詞、關(guān)系代詞、反身代詞、疑問(wèn)代詞、復(fù)合疑問(wèn)代詞、指示代詞,要注意代詞的各人稱之間和單復(fù)數(shù)之間的誤用,關(guān)系代詞which, that, as之間的誤用,關(guān)系代詞that與疑問(wèn)代詞what之間的誤用,關(guān)系代詞which與關(guān)系副詞when, where,以及what與how的誤用等。例如:

a. We do not like he.

b. If you like this books, you can take them away.

c. His book is different from me.

d. The population of China is larger than those of Japan.

正確的句子:

a. We do not like him.

b. If you like these books, you can take them away.

c. His book is different from mine.

d. The population of China is larger than that of Japan.

漢語(yǔ)里,人稱代詞沒(méi)有主格、賓格和所有格之變,而英語(yǔ)中的人稱代詞有主格、賓格和所有格之變,而且每格都具有其自身的用途,分別充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)等。尤其要注意的是,人稱代詞充當(dāng)介詞賓語(yǔ)時(shí),也要采用其賓格形式。

 8.連詞的錯(cuò)誤

連詞主要有兩類,即并列連詞和從屬連詞,考查點(diǎn)主要是并列連詞(分遞進(jìn)式、轉(zhuǎn)折式、選擇式和因果式四種)之間的誤用(主要是but與so/and之間的誤用),從屬連詞之間的誤用以及并列連詞與從屬連詞之間的誤用等。例如:

a. He had little to eat and a large house to live in.

b. He had no sooner arrived when he fell ill.

c. If you go this way, and you will soon see the hospital.

正確的句子:

a. He had little to eat but a large house to live in.

b. He had no sooner arrived than he fell ill.

c.1f you go this way,you will soon see the hospital.

9.名詞的錯(cuò)誤

名詞主要考查單數(shù)名詞變復(fù)數(shù)名詞,這主要是受東西方文化差異的影響,英語(yǔ)中除了不可數(shù)名詞和單數(shù)名詞用單數(shù)外,可數(shù)名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。另外還有一些特殊形式。例如:

a. What a beautiful weather we are having today!

b. Please give my best regard to your parents.

c. I have got good marks in all my subject.

正確的句子:

a. What beautiful weather we are having today!

b. Please give my best regards to your parents.

c. I have got good marks in all my subjects.

10. 在使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和助動(dòng)詞時(shí)產(chǎn)生的錯(cuò)誤類型

這類錯(cuò)誤有以下幾種情況:① 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后的動(dòng)詞使用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài);② 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后的動(dòng)詞加“s”③ 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后的動(dòng)詞加“ing”④”will”后面的“be”動(dòng)詞用“am、“is”或“are ”;⑤助動(dòng)詞“do”后面的動(dòng)詞用動(dòng)詞過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài);⑥.助動(dòng)詞“do”后面的動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)加“s";⑦ 助動(dòng)詞“do”后面的動(dòng)詞加“ing”等。例如:   

a. I could did my homework.

b. He may goes to school by bike every day.

正確的句子:

a. I could do my homework.

b. He may go to school by bike every day.

結(jié)束語(yǔ)

高中生英語(yǔ)寫作中語(yǔ)法的錯(cuò)誤,是不可回避的事實(shí),也是工作在一線的英語(yǔ)教師面臨的一個(gè)棘手的問(wèn)題。研究農(nóng)村高中英語(yǔ)寫作中的會(huì)出現(xiàn)哪些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,其成因是什么,對(duì)于今后采取的什么樣的寫作教學(xué)策略,進(jìn)而卓有成效的提高高中英語(yǔ)寫作水平就很有現(xiàn)實(shí)意義。


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