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例談高考英語“六步法”

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新編《英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》和2002年《考試說明》都對英語的書面表達(dá)能力有基本的要求。要求學(xué)生根據(jù)情景寫出百字左右的短文,其形式各異。根據(jù)以上的要求我們在平時的教學(xué)中采用了“‘六步法’的寫作模式”,收到了良好的效果。

例三、請根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一篇介紹香港的短文,詞數(shù)100字左右。

香港位于中國的東南部,面積1045平方公里,人口600多萬,被稱為“東方明珠”。1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后,當(dāng)時的中國政府被迫將香港割讓給英國,F(xiàn)在她已經(jīng)回到祖國的懷抱,而且前景會更加美好。

1)仔細(xì)審題:本文屬于說明性文章。

2)理清要點(diǎn):


(1)位置、面積和人口

(2)鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后香港的處境

(3)97年后回到祖國懷抱

(4)其前景美好

生詞:明珠 pearl 鴉片 opium





3)譯寫單句

a) Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1045km2. Her population is more than 6 million.

b) She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.

c)In 1997 she returned to motherland.

d)Her future is very beautiful.

4)連句成篇

Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1045km2 and population is more than 6 million.

She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997 she returned to motherland, and her future is very beautiful.

5) 潤色或文

Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. She has an area of 1045km2 and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.

In 1842, she was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the Opium War, and the people of Hongkong lived a hard life.

In 1997, she returned to motherland, and the people of Hongkong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful.

6) 定稿謄寫

Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. She has an area of 1045km2 and a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.

In 1842 the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hongkong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people of Hongkong suffered a lot.

After the return of Hongkong to China in 1997, the people of Hongkong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.(89 words)

例四、假如你叫張明。從《天津日報(bào)》看到某公司(石家莊)招聘一名英語秘書。根據(jù)啟事請你用英語寫封簡短的應(yīng)聘書寄往:石家莊1378信箱,說明你的履歷。主要內(nèi)容如下:


姓名
張明
年齡
25歲

學(xué)歷
南開大學(xué)畢業(yè)

工作經(jīng)歷
從教英語3年

愛好和興趣
英語口語、書面語和文秘

通訊處
南開大學(xué)101信箱

寫信時間
2002年10月29日




1)仔細(xì)審題:本文屬于求職書信體

2)理清要點(diǎn):

(1)貴公司招聘一名英語秘書。

(2)大學(xué)畢業(yè)后從教三年。

(3)對秘書工作感興趣。

(4)英語口語、書面語都不錯。

(5)希望貴公司能錄用。

3)譯詞單句

a)Your company wants an English secretary.

b)I work as an English teacher after I graduated from the university.

c)I am interested in the job of secretary.

d)I speak and write English very well.

e)I hope your company can employ me.

4)連句成篇

Your company wants an English secretary. I work as an English teacher after I graduated from the university. I am interested in the job of secretary. I speak and write English very well. I hope your company can employ me.

5)潤色或文

An English secretary is wanted in your company. I want to take this job. My name is Zhang Ming, a girl of twenty-five. I have been teaching English for 3 years since I graduated from the English Department of Nankai University. I think I will be interested in the job of secretary. I can speak and write English very well.

I hope I want very much to be accepted by your company.

6)定稿謄寫

P. O. Box. 101

Tianjin

October 29, 2002

P. O. Box 1378

Shijiazhuang

Dear sir,

I have recently learned from Tianjin Daily that an English secretary is wanted in your company. I beg to take this job. My name is Zhang Ming, a girl of twenty-five. I have been an English teacher for 3 years since I graduated from the English Department of Nankai University. I think I will be interested in the job of secretary. I can speak and write English very well.

It is hoped that I will be accepted by your company. Would you please reply to me once you have admitted me? And in future I will make more money for this company. Thank you very much.(106 words)



Yours,

Zhang Ming


例五、請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一份書面通知以便你在你校“校園廣播”中宣讀



題目
颶風(fēng)及其危害

主講人
地理教師申先生

地點(diǎn)
二中306教室

時間
11月4日上午十點(diǎn)

注意

事項(xiàng)
1、請自帶鋼筆、筆記本喧嘩。

2、請準(zhǔn)時參加

3、會后放電影

4、11月5日下午三點(diǎn)討論



1)仔細(xì)審題:本題屬于書面通知形式。

2)理清要點(diǎn):

(1) 由地理老師申先生主講颶風(fēng)及其危害

(2) 11月4日上午十點(diǎn)在二中306教室舉行

(3) 帶上必要的用具。不要喧嘩。請準(zhǔn)時參加。會后看電影。第二天討論

3)譯詞單句

a)HURRICANE AND ITS DAMAGE is given by geography teacher Mr. Shen.

b)It is held in Classroom 306 of No. 2 middle school at 10:00, November 4.

c)Please bring your necessary things there. Don’t talk there. Please be there on time. After the meeting there will be a discussion about that next week.

4) 連句成篇

HURRICANE AND ITS DAMAGE is given by geography teacher, Mr. Shen and it is held in Classroom 306 of No. 2 middle school at 10:00, November 4. Please bring your necessary things there. Don’t talk there and be there on time. After the meeting there will be a film to be shown. There is a discussion about that next week.

5)潤色或文

A lecture on “HURRICANE AND ITS DAMAGE” will be given by geography teacher, Mr. Shen and it is held in Classroom 306 of No. 2 middle school at 10:00, November 4. When you are there please bring your pens and notebooks and don’t talk to each other, and go there on time. After the meeting a film will be shown. The next day please talk about that.

6)定稿謄寫

All students:

A lecture on HURRICANE AND ITS DAMAGE will be given by geography teacher, Mr. Shen , and it is held at Classroom 306 of No. 2 middle school at 10:00, November 4. After the meeting a good film about the Long March will be shown, and a discussion about the lecture will take place at 3 p.m. tomorrow.

When you are there, please bring your pens and notebooks and attend it on time. Don’t talk to each other during the lecture.(81 words)



Students’ Union

November 3, 2002

例六、根據(jù)下列要求寫一篇口頭通知:

歡迎您乘坐波音747飛機(jī)。本次航班8點(diǎn)起飛,下午1點(diǎn)到達(dá)新疆烏魯木齊市。請于7:40登機(jī)。乘客們在飛行期間請勿吸煙,系好安全帶,甚至不要打手機(jī)。飛機(jī)平穩(wěn)著陸后方可走動。謝謝合作。

生詞:波音 Boeing 烏魯木齊 Urumuqi 登機(jī) board

1)仔細(xì)審題:本文屬于口頭通知

2)理清提要

(1)歡迎您乘坐波音747飛機(jī)

(2)本次航班的登機(jī)時間以及起降時間

(3)飛行期間請注意乘機(jī)的有關(guān)規(guī)定。

3)譯詞單句

a)You are welcome on the Boeing 747 plane.

b)Please board the plane at 7:40. The plane takes off at 8:00 and arrives at 1 p.m. in Urumuqi, Xinjiang.

c)During the flight don’t smoke, and fasten your seat belt, and even don’t make a mobile phone call to anyone else. But don’t move around until the plane lands safe.

4)連句成篇

You are welcome on the Boeing 747 plane.

Please board the plane at 7:40. The plane takes off at 8 and arrives at 1 p.m. in Urumuqi, Xinjiang. During the flight don’t smoke, and fasten your seat belt and even don’t make a mobile phone call to anyone else. But don’t move around until the plane lands safe.

5)潤色或文

You are welcome on the Boeing 747 plane.

Please board the plane at 7:40. It takes off at 8 and arrives at 1p.m. in Urumuqi, Xinjiang. During the flight please don’t smoke, and fasten your seat belt and even don’t make a mobile phone call to anyone else. Don’t move around until the plane lands safe.

6定稿謄寫

Ladies and gentlemen:

You are welcome on the Boeing 747 plane.

Please board the plane at 7:40. It takes off at 8 a.m. and arrives at 1 p.m. in Urumuqi, Xinjiang in the northwest of China. During the flight you must follow its rules and the conductors’ instructions. For example, please don’t smoke in the plane, and fasten your seat belts and even don’t make a mobile phone call to anyone else. Don’t move around until the plane lands safe.

Thank you very much (81 words)

例七、改寫

假定你剛從澳洲訪問歸來。下列的對話是你在澳洲的一段經(jīng)歷。請你用第一人稱把這個對話改寫成一篇短文。

A: Excuse me, I was wondering if you could help me.

B: Certainly. I will be glad to try. What do you need?

A: Could you tell me when the next bus leaves for Sydney? I’m not sure how to read this timetable.

B: H-m-m. It looks like one leaves at 12:25.

A: Thank you very much. I couldn’t figure it out. What time do you have by your watch now?

B: 11:20. You have much time.

A: Oh, good. Do you know where I could get a cup of coffee?

B: There’s a machine over there.

A: I’m sorry to keep bothering you but can you show me how it works?

B: Sure. Put a plastic cup under the spout. Put your money in here at the top. Select the kind of coffee you want and push the button next to it. The coffee will pour into your cup.

生詞:figure out 搞清 bother 打擾 spout 噴口

1)仔細(xì)審題:本文屬于記敘文題目。改寫時注意

2)理清要點(diǎn):

1)在汽車站等車。

2)有一位婦女坐在我旁邊。

3)問下一班公交車幾時發(fā)以及對方的時間。

4)因?yàn)闀r間充足,要咖啡喝。

5)不知道怎樣使用機(jī)器,所以對方告訴了使用方法。

3)譯詞單句

a) I wait for a bus at a bus station.

b) A woman sits next to me.

c)I ask her when the next bus leaves and she tells me it is leaving at 12:25.

d)Because the time is enough I want a cup of coffee to drink.

e)I don’t know how to use the machine and the woman tells me its usage.

4) 連句成篇

I was waiting for a bus at a bus station. A woman sat next to me, and I asked her when the next bus left and she told me it was 12:20. Because the time was enough I wanted to drink a cup of coffee. But I didn’t know how to use the machine.

5)潤色或文

I was waiting for a bus at a bus station. A woman sat next to me, and I asked her when the next bus left and she told me it was 12:20. Because the time was enough I wanted to drink a cup of coffee. But I didn’t know how to use the machine. She told me to put a plastic cup under the spout and put the money in here at the top. At last I di as she told.

6)定稿謄寫

I was waiting for a bus at a bus station. I needed some help. There was a woman sitting next to me. So I asked her to tell me when the next bus left for Sydney. She told me that it was leaving at 12:20. Since I had got plenty of time I wanted to have a cup of coffee. The woman showed me a machine. But I didn’t know how to use it. She told me to put a plastic under the spout and put money in at the top. At last I did as she told me. (99 words)


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