1.改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式，不要一味地都是主語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭，接著是謂語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)，最后再加一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。可以把狀語(yǔ)置于句首，或用分詞做狀語(yǔ)等。?
�。墼模輜e met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
�。坌拚輊arly in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
�。墼模輙he young man couldn't help crying when he heard the bad news.?
�。坌拚輍earing the bad news，the young man couldn't help crying.?
2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語(yǔ)等。
�、�?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)句?
�。墼模輒y parents praised ah fu warmly. it had saved my little sister bravely.
�。坌拚輒y parents praised ah fu warmly. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister bravely.?
②由what等引導(dǎo)的從句，此處的what相當(dāng)于中文的“所……”，有很大的概括力，如：?
�。墼模輜e had to stand there to catch the offender.?
�。坌拚輜hat we had to do was (to) stand there， trying to catch the offender.?
what china has achieved in recent years is known through the world.
china is no longer what it used to be.?
�、塾蓋ith或without引導(dǎo)的短語(yǔ)。如：?
he sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.?
�、芊衷~短語(yǔ)。如：?
satisfied with the result， he decided to go on with a new experiment.?
⑤倒裝句。如：?
only in this way can we achieve our goal.?
never before have i seen such a wonderful film.?
�、奘÷跃�。如：?
if so， victory will be ours.
you can make some changes wherever necessary.?
�、邔�(duì)比，這是中文中也常用的方法。如：?
failure is not a crime， but failure to learn from failure is.?
when i play， i feel excited， and after it i feel relaxed.?
3.通過(guò)分句和合句，增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。?
［原文］he stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.?
�。坌拚輍e stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.?
�。墼模輜e had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.?
some told stories. some played chess.?
�。坌拚輆fter a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing，telling jokes and playing chess.?
4.學(xué)會(huì)使用過(guò)渡詞。如：?
�、龠f進(jìn)： then(然后)， besides(還有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。?
�、谵D(zhuǎn)折： however(然而)， but(但是)， on the country(相反)， after all(畢竟)等。?
③總結(jié)： finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(總之)， in conclusion(最后)等。?
④強(qiáng)調(diào)： indeed(確實(shí))， certainly(一定)， surely(確定)， above all(尤其)等。?
⑤對(duì)比： in the same way(同樣地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。?
5.注意使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子。?
二、對(duì)于“較復(fù)雜的詞匯”，可以從以下幾個(gè)方面著手。?
1.注意使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。如：?
�。墼模輆 new railway is being built in my hometown.?
�。坌拚輆 new railway is under construction in my hometown.?
2.使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞。如：?
thank you for sharing the time with us.?
the way he views the world is very practical.?
3.避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語(yǔ) 高中語(yǔ)文。如：?
�。墼模輎 like reading while my brother likes watching television.
［修正］i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
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